My Speech

Hi everyone today I will be talking about my speech my class ro

om 14 have done there speech it was awesome the class finalist were...  

• Moonlight
• Rigg
• Milika
• Wynta
• Jordyn
• Jack
• Ifalame
• Seem/Me
• Siaosi
• Siosifa

I need to improve on... 

• Speaking louder
• Memorise my speech
• Eye contact
• Better expression

I think I done well on was...

• Little bit of eye contact
• Asking questions
• Rhetorical questions

This is my speech

INTRO

Could you imagine a world with no money? If you want to go to Hawaii done, if you want the new kicks or private jet like a click of a finger you have it. Well if you listen on I think I can convince you why money shouldn’t exist.

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Money mmmm? Think about it for a moment if there was no money homeless people would not be living on the streets. Then would you be feeling sorrowful for the homeless. The homeless would be able to have clothes, shoes and homes and many other things that people with money have. There is so many things that you need in life but is so much money.

Paragraph 2

   “Jackpot” do you think gambling should be aloud? Well I personally think not. All your money could be spent and that might be how some people became homeless don’t you think like really is that how you want to spend most of your life well I don’t. What if your car broke down and you need to fix it and you can’t because you spent it all on gambling. You buy something and then you don’t want it and that was your life saving. If there was no money you would not need to use your life savings.

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MOVIES who likes movies and movie night? Double hands up for me. What if you were going out for movie night and you did not have enough money what will you do and you promised your friend that you will come, and watch the movie with him or her. Your car has a little bit of fuel but you only have enough money for the movie then you say “I have enough to go there and back from the movies” Then your car stops in the middle of the road or motorway so sad right. If there was no money you would be there and back from the movies.

  

Paragraph 4

Do you want to go to another country?. Well I don't want to cause I am scared but my sister wants to go everywhere on planet earth, she has planned everything out like what. Well I know for sure that most of you here want to go back to your home country or visit Hawaii. If you c want to visit your home country you have to pay a lot like my dad did when he went to Germany. If there is no money you can go there for free. Maybe you want to see where the trenches were dug up and like maybe go inside it.

Closing

With the first 3 paragraphs money shouldn’t exist the other 1 is just for fun without money you can do important stuff like visit your family or friends. This is why I strongly believe that money shouldn’t exist. If I have convinced you why money shouldn’t exist put you hand up. Thank you for your time.